tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3737061754317105564.post2355399111835965683..comments2024-03-22T16:42:32.663+05:30Comments on IELTS with George Andrews - HOME: Essay 024 (Gap year)IELTS Essays from George Andrewshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13572472129516655198noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3737061754317105564.post-15388331337086246682011-10-18T12:54:01.830+05:302011-10-18T12:54:01.830+05:30[QUOT]For example, an employment can give [b]them[...[QUOT]For example, an employment can give [b]them[/b] prior knowledge about the professional skills that [b]he[/b] needs to acquire in [b]his[/b] university education.[/QUOT]<br /><br />You are messing the plural form 'they' (which obviously describes 'young people' who are mainly spoken about in the 2nd paragraph) with the singular 'he' (which describes a 'young man' who isn't yet mentioned until the 3rd paragraph.<br /><br />Despite various mistakes throught the text, it is a nice essay overall.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3737061754317105564.post-4108366657329136772011-09-17T14:49:49.509+05:302011-09-17T14:49:49.509+05:30ThanksThanksAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3737061754317105564.post-11653655032009604542011-05-26T05:38:15.884+05:302011-05-26T05:38:15.884+05:30thanks for your incredible effort...for preparing ...thanks for your incredible effort...for preparing these many essays...hats off to u...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3737061754317105564.post-40252572072719872010-11-19T19:19:32.483+05:302010-11-19T19:19:32.483+05:30Its really helpful ;)
Thanks from Malaysian studen...Its really helpful ;)<br />Thanks from Malaysian studentsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3737061754317105564.post-1379953033889099262009-11-14T06:14:39.559+05:302009-11-14T06:14:39.559+05:30Thanks for the correction. In fact, I am not able...Thanks for the correction. In fact, I am not able to edit the essay because of some technical snag in the blog.IELTS Essays from George Andrewshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13572472129516655198noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3737061754317105564.post-12863187951596802742009-11-13T06:48:05.158+05:302009-11-13T06:48:05.158+05:30Thanks for your great job.
There is a spelling err...Thanks for your great job.<br />There is a spelling error, in the third paragraph, "fir such a long time".<br />Do you mean "for such a long time"?Ke Caihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04686894395024117708noreply@blogger.com